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4 hours, my first attempt at a realistic face without using any outlines. Critiques welcome as always.

This is Frankie (albeit an older/matured version) from mine and :iconnikari-keyo:'s manga, "Unspoken Words".

I stuffed up on her eye shapes I think.

Background fractal made by me. :)

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~GlacierDragon Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The way you did the background makes me think of the Green Man :D (Probably because of the leaf shapes.) Is it a fractal?
Eyes can be a pain :C But I think you drew them well here <:
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*OddworldianPrincess Apr 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yup, it's a quick forced 4 sided fractal ^^
Looking back at this I can see I simply didn't make her eyelids curvy enough. I do like her overall, I think I'd like to see myself do more paints like this in the future.
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=Paskiz Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is very interesting, I like art that raises questions about whats happening in the picture :)

And I think you did a good job with the face, its really hard to draw anything realistic (thats why I dont do it).
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*OddworldianPrincess Sep 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thankyou! I could have added more to her and included her ponytails but I didn't want to take anything away from the face.

In some ways realism is easier because it's more mimicking reality than actually incorporating your own style. I was so surprised that this took such less time in comparison to an anime style drawing. The time it took me to do this (plus render the fractal), I would have only done some final lineart on an anime/manga drawing.

The only way to get better is to try ;)
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=Paskiz Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That is true, practice makes perfect:D
Its really hard to tell what you could have done better, only thing I can think of is that the eyes might still have been a little too big for realistic, but thats kinda hard to tell as in real life people have different proportions, but if you think a perfect circle around the edges of the eyes to simulate like how big they are without the eyelids, theyr really big. Otherwise the eyes look really good! :)
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*OddworldianPrincess Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're exactly right, I have no idea why I drew her eyes in that shape, it was kind of bad. I swear I never realise these things until I've finished colouring.
Oh well, I'll TRY to keep that in mind next picture I draw but jeez, I always forget :P

Thanks so much for your support and advice, it's good to be able to see my art through the eyes of other people.
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Mood: Love =Paskiz Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Youre most welcome :) just keep up the good work! :D
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Mood: Joy *OddworldianPrincess Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
-salutes-
As always!
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~aliendroid Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is interesting, but for some reason it creeps me out!!
Technique seems to be good and you've done a wonderful job on making the eyes realistic. All in all a great job... doesn't make it any less creepy to me though.
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*OddworldianPrincess Sep 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh no! I didn't mean to make her look creepy! D:
Lol, it's probably because her eyes are wide and gazing and quite contrasted in comparison to her pale skin :P
Thanks so much, I enjoyed it and the fact it was literally 3 times faster to complete than a standard anime style drawing makes me keen to try this style more often. :)
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